Harlequin critiqued Sweet Justice!
At least, they looked at the first 500 words. A while back I saw they were accepting for a First Page Feedback project on their blog. So I did a whirlwind edit of Sweet Justice and sent it in. So glad I did!
Follow the link to read the first page and their comments. Lots of great advice that will make my opening stronger. As the image on the left shows, I caught the typos after I hit send. Doh! To err is human…
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