ProofreadingHarlequin critiqued Sweet Justice!

At least, they looked at the first 500 words.  A while back I saw they were accepting for a First Page Feedback project on their blog.  So I did a whirlwind edit of Sweet Justice and sent it in.  So glad I did!

Follow the link to read the first page and their comments.  Lots of great advice that will make my opening stronger.  As the image on the left shows, I caught the typos after I hit send.  Doh!  To err is human…